[PATCH gnome-team 0/2] Add entries for important gnome-team changes

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5 participants
  • Hilton Chain
  • Liliana Marie Prikler
  • Maxim Cournoyer
  • pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
  • Vivien Kraus
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:58 +0100
(address . guix-patches@gnu.org)
cover.1708883883.git.vivien@planete-kraus.eu
Dear guix,

I see two important news entries that users should maybe be aware of. What do
you think of my wording? Do you see something else that should get its own
entry? For instance, now dbus writes its system socket in /run/dbus instead
of /var/run/dbus (the latter being a symlink for compatibility), do you think
users should be aware of that?

Best regards,

Vivien

Vivien Kraus (2):
news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

etc/news.scm | 22 ++++++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 22 insertions(+)


base-commit: 06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:55 +0100
[PATCH gnome-team 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
b38ca8f872ed7825e8428a11f7c41b8e1cc9f187.1708883883.git.vivien@planete-kraus.eu
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
---
etc/news.scm | 12 ++++++++++++
1 file changed, 12 insertions(+)

Toggle diff (25 lines)
diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..2f41669406 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,18 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+ (title
+ (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+ (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configuration de matériel"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+ (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
+
(entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
(title
(en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:56 +0100
[PATCH gnome-team 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
56bacd5983cbc0e205aa45c0914d35bf3be5857b.1708883883.git.vivien@planete-kraus.eu
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
---
etc/news.scm | 10 ++++++++++
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)

Toggle diff (23 lines)
diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 2f41669406..74af1a7eca 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,16 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+ (title
+ (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+ (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use wayland instead
+of xorg by default.")
+ (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser wayland au lieu de xorg.")))
+
(entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
(title
(en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
--
2.41.0
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Maxim Cournoyer wrote on 26 Feb 05:07 +0100
Re: [PATCH gnome-team 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
(name . Vivien Kraus)(address . vivien@planete-kraus.eu)
87o7c3lvfk.fsf@gmail.com
Hi,

Vivien Kraus <vivien@planete-kraus.eu> writes:

Toggle quote (21 lines)
> * etc/news.scm: Add entry.
>
> Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
> ---
> etc/news.scm | 12 ++++++++++++
> 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
> index 3e8c88499f..2f41669406 100644
> --- a/etc/news.scm
> +++ b/etc/news.scm
> @@ -28,6 +28,18 @@
> (channel-news
> (version 0)
>
> + (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
> + (title
> + (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
> + (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configuration de
> matériel"))

configurationS

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> + (body
> + (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
> +with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
> +project).")
> + (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
> +configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
> +@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
> +
> (entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
> (title
> (en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")

Otherwise LGTM.

--
Thanks,
Maxim
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Maxim Cournoyer wrote on 26 Feb 05:09 +0100
Re: [PATCH gnome-team 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
(name . Vivien Kraus)(address . vivien@planete-kraus.eu)
87jzmrlvdh.fsf@gmail.com
Hello,

Vivien Kraus <vivien@planete-kraus.eu> writes:

Toggle quote (26 lines)
> * etc/news.scm: Add entry.
>
> Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
> ---
> etc/news.scm | 10 ++++++++++
> 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
> index 2f41669406..74af1a7eca 100644
> --- a/etc/news.scm
> +++ b/etc/news.scm
> @@ -28,6 +28,16 @@
> (channel-news
> (version 0)
>
> + (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
> + (title
> + (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
> + (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
> + (body
> + (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use wayland instead
> +of xorg by default.")
> + (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
> +utiliser wayland au lieu de xorg.")))
> +

Nitpick, but I'd capitalize the Wayland and Xorg proper nouns.

Otherwise LGTM.

--
Thanks,
Maxim
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:55 +0100
[PATCH gnome-team v2 1/2] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
0ec6bbc1b3192e69983b38d1976e31bd72c4dc2c.1708928158.git.vivien@planete-kraus.eu
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
---
etc/news.scm | 12 ++++++++++++
1 file changed, 12 insertions(+)

Toggle diff (25 lines)
diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..ae103d6988 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,18 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+ (title
+ (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+ (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configurations de matériel"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+ (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
+
(entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
(title
(en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:56 +0100
[PATCH gnome-team v2 2/2] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
83934a300dd735a5dee51dc19a0d2d714d0bd0c4.1708928158.git.vivien@planete-kraus.eu
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
---
etc/news.scm | 10 ++++++++++
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)

Toggle diff (23 lines)
diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index ae103d6988..836ebb2127 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,16 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+ (title
+ (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+ (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use Wayland instead
+of Xorg by default.")
+ (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser Wayland au lieu de Xorg.")))
+
(entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
(title
(en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 26 Feb 07:15 +0100
[PATCH gnome-team v2 0/2] Slightly better news for GNOME
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
cover.1708928158.git.vivien@planete-kraus.eu
Oops!

Here is a V2. It is not exhaustive.

Best regards,

Vivien

Vivien Kraus (2):
news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

etc/news.scm | 22 ++++++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 22 insertions(+)


base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
--
2.41.0
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Liliana Marie Prikler wrote on 26 Feb 20:48 +0100
[PATCH v3 0/3] *** SUBJECT HERE ***
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
cover.1708976911.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
*** BLURB HERE ***

Liliana Marie Prikler (1):
news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

Vivien Kraus (2):
news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

etc/news.scm | 49 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 49 insertions(+)


base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
--
2.41.0
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Liliana Marie Prikler wrote on 26 Feb 20:46 +0100
[PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
df4270e03d97904586ad5a0bdc112584fd76fade.1708976911.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
* etc/teams.scm: Add entry.
---
etc/news.scm | 21 +++++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 21 insertions(+)

Toggle diff (34 lines)
diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index d208988297..be1514692b 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,27 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
+ (title
+ (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular desktop service")
+ (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem Dienst"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now differentiates between
+shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring more structure
+in its configuration.
+
+With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated and others
+removed. If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-...} package causes an error while
+running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from your profile.")
+ (de "Der Dienst @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} unterscheidet nun
+unter andrem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities, und extra-packages und
+bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.
+
+Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet deklariert
+und andere entfernt. Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt zu einem Fehler während Ihrer
+Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von ihrem Profil.")))
+
(entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
(title
(en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:55 +0100
[PATCH v3 1/3] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
75b4f191a6bd2438f00566527131c3321418b808.1708976911.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
---
etc/news.scm | 15 +++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 15 insertions(+)

Toggle diff (28 lines)
diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..6dec7a08b7 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,21 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+ (title
+ (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+ (de "Udev verwaltet nun auch Hardwarekonfigurationen")
+ (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configurations de matériel"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+ (de "Der Udev-Dienst kann nun mit Hardwaredatenbanken (auch als
+@dfn{hwdb} bekannt) konfiguriert und erweitert werden.")
+ (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")))
+
(entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
(title
(en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:56 +0100
[PATCH v3 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
2ff567dc4b029d80cd0ce7125c822cbd3aff0167.1708976911.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
---
etc/news.scm | 13 +++++++++++++
1 file changed, 13 insertions(+)

Toggle diff (26 lines)
diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 6dec7a08b7..d208988297 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,19 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+ (title
+ (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+ (de "GNOME Display Manager nutzt nun standardgemäß Wayland")
+ (fr "GDM utilise wayland par défaut"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use Wayland instead
+of Xorg by default.")
+ (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun standardgemäß
+Wayland anstelle von Xorg.")
+ (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser Wayland au lieu de Xorg.")))
+
(entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
(title
(en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
--
2.41.0
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Liliana Marie Prikler wrote on 26 Feb 21:08 +0100
(address . control@debbugs.gnu.org)
bb72cecd3aa656cc411689a1a53e53dbe6f147b8.camel@gmail.com
block 69414 by 69392
thanks
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 26 Feb 21:28 +0100
d8304ce857c94cb8b3d729c8b90fd10df00ad1d6.camel@planete-kraus.eu
Le lundi 26 février 2024 à 20:46 +0100, Liliana Marie Prikler a écrit :
Toggle quote (4 lines)
> + (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
> +        (title
> +         (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular
> desktop service")
Wouldn’t it be more precise to say “system service” instead of “desktop
service”?

Toggle quote (3 lines)
> +         (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem
> Dienst"))

Suggested fr translation with “system service”: "Mise à jour de GNOME
en version 44 avec un service système plus modulaire"
(remove “système” if “system service” is not relevant)

Toggle quote (13 lines)
> +        (body
> +         (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now
> differentiates between
> +shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring
> more structure
> +in its configuration.
> +
> +With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated
> and others
> +removed.  If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-...} package causes an
> error while
> +running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from your
> profile.")
(Ah yes, this is very important.)

Since it is Texinfo, maybe you could use @dots{} instead of “...”. I
would also write: “some shell extensions have been deprecated…” instead
of “some extensions have been deprecated…”, so the error message will
look more familiar. Since the fields are actual record fields, maybe
they can be marked up with @code{}?

Suggested fr: "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
maintenant les paquets @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-
packages} (entre autres) pour donner plus de structure à sa
configuration.

Pendant la mise à jour vers GNOME 44, certaines extensions du shell ont
été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil."

Toggle quote (12 lines)
> +         (de "Der Dienst @code{gnome-desktop-service-type}
> unterscheidet nun
> +unter andrem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities, und extra-
> packages und
> +bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.
> +
> +Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet
> deklariert
> +und andere entfernt.  Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
> +@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt zu einem Fehler während Ihrer
> +Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von ihrem Profil.")))
> +
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Hilton Chain wrote on 27 Feb 03:07 +0100
Re: [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 0/3] gnome-team news entries.
(name . Liliana Marie Prikler)(address . liliana.prikler@gmail.com)
87sf1e3bjp.wl-hako@ultrarare.space
Hi,

On Tue, 27 Feb 2024 03:48:31 +0800,
Liliana Marie Prikler wrote:
Toggle quote (18 lines)
>
> *** BLURB HERE ***
>
> Liliana Marie Prikler (1):
> news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
>
> Vivien Kraus (2):
> news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
> news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
>
> etc/news.scm | 49 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> 1 file changed, 49 insertions(+)
>
>
> base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
> --
> 2.41.0

Take my translation. :)

For 498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179, "The udev service also manages
hardware configuration files":
Toggle snippet (7 lines)
(zh "udev ????????????")
(zh "???? eudev ????????@dfn{hwdb}??????
@code{udev-service-type}?")



06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae, "The GNOME Display Manager uses
wayland by default":
Toggle snippet (6 lines)
(zh "GNOME ??????GDM??????? Wayland ??")
(zh "@code{gdm-service-type} ???? Xorg ?? Wayland?")



523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5, "GNOME updated to version 44 with a
more modular desktop service":
Toggle snippet (8 lines)
(zh "GNOME 44 ???????????????")
(zh "@code{gnome-desktop-service-type} ???? @code{shell}?
@code{utilities}?@code{extra-packages} ?????? GNOME ??????????

?? GNOME 44 ????? GNOME Shell ?????????????????
@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} ??????????????? profile ?
???")
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Liliana Marie Prikler wrote on 27 Feb 06:19 +0100
Re: [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
3b9d1f0ba2626dc78b3c07ac0eb385146db88464.camel@gmail.com
Am Montag, dem 26.02.2024 um 21:28 +0100 schrieb Vivien Kraus:
Toggle quote (15 lines)
> Le lundi 26 février 2024 à 20:46 +0100, Liliana Marie Prikler a
> écrit :
> > + (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
> > +        (title
> > +         (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular
> > desktop service")
> Wouldn’t it be more precise to say “system service” instead of
> “desktop service”?
>
> > +         (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem
> > Dienst"))
>
> Suggested fr translation with “system service”: "Mise à jour de GNOME
> en version 44 avec un service système plus modulaire"
> (remove “système” if “system service” is not relevant)
system-service is indeed not relevant, because I was hinting at the
"desktop" in gnome-desktop-service-type.

Toggle quote (18 lines)
> > +        (body
> > +         (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now
> > differentiates between
> > +shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring
> > more structure
> > +in its configuration.
> > +
> > +With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated
> > and others
> > +removed.  If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-...} package causes
> > an
> > error while
> > +running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from
> > your
> > profile.")
> (Ah yes, this is very important.)
>
> Since it is Texinfo, maybe you could use @dots{} instead of “...”.
Not sure if that works recursively.

Toggle quote (3 lines)
> I would also write: “some shell extensions have been deprecated…”
> instead of “some extensions have been deprecated…”, so the error
> message will look more familiar. 
Sure.

Toggle quote (2 lines)
> Since the fields are actual record fields, maybe they can be marked
> up with @code{}?
Good hint.

Toggle quote (10 lines)
> Suggested fr: "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
> maintenant les paquets @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-
> packages} (entre autres) pour donner plus de structure à sa
> configuration.
>
> Pendant la mise à jour vers GNOME 44, certaines extensions du shell
> ont
> été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
> @code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
> effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil."
Have you checked how that renders?

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>
Cheers
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pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote on 27 Feb 09:21 +0100
Re: [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
(name . Liliana Marie Prikler)(address . liliana.prikler@gmail.com)
87jzmqgvvz.fsf@pelzflorian.de
Hi all. Good to see so many translations, and so much development for
Guix!

@Vivien:
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> Suggested fr: "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
> maintenant les paquets @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-

Perhaps “les champs” as in English, instead of “les paquets”.

@Liliana:
Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
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> * etc/teams.scm: Add entry.

teams?

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> +unter andrem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities, und extra-packages und
> +bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.

In German, there shouldn’t be an Oxford comma, instead: utilities und
extra-packages (without comma).

Other than that, even though I would have written “unter anderem”, I do
approve of the “unter andrem”. Wiktionary says it’s OK. :)

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> +Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet deklariert
> +und andere entfernt. Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
> +@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt zu einem Fehler während Ihrer

Paariges Komma fehlt: “beginnt, zu einem Fehler”

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> +Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von ihrem Profil.")))

von Ihrem Profil

Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
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>> Since it is Texinfo, maybe you could use @dots{} instead of “...”.
> Not sure if that works recursively.
>> été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
>> @code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
>> effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil."
> Have you checked how that renders?

There is precedent in another news entry on Childhurds:

When you do this, @command{guix system} generates
a @file{/etc/guix/machines.scm} file by concatenating the @code{(build-machine
@dots{})} expressions you specified.

Regards,
Florian
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pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote on 27 Feb 09:29 +0100
Re: [bug#69392] [PATCH v3 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
(name . Vivien Kraus)(address . liliana.prikler@gmail.com)
87frxegvir.fsf@pelzflorian.de
Hi Vivien. Following up on Maxim Cournoyer’s suggestion, better
capitalize Wayland and Xorg in the titles as well.

Regards,
Florian
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pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote on 27 Feb 09:33 +0100
(name . Vivien Kraus)(address . liliana.prikler@gmail.com)
87bk82gvc7.fsf@pelzflorian.de
P.S.

Vivien Kraus <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
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> + (title
> + (de "GNOME Display Manager nutzt nun standardgemäß Wayland")[…])
> + (body
> + (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun standardgemäß
> +Wayland anstelle von Xorg.")

Please write “als Vorgabe” instead of “standardgemäß” in both German
title and body, because it is the translation of “by default” that is
used everywhere in the German manual.

Regards,
Florian
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:55 +0100
[PATCH v4 1/3] news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
7db505670ec86b3d889fd6834ec0516c55096b85.1709056571.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: I3c27b10eab501cca6ed0e32a1b30d92f212266b4
Signed-off-by: Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
---
etc/news.scm | 18 ++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 18 insertions(+)

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diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 3e8c88499f..18586768c0 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,24 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
+ (title
+ (en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
+ (de "Udev verwaltet nun auch Hardwarekonfigurationen")
+ (fr "Le service udev gère maintenant les configurations de matériel")
+ (zh "udev ????????????"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{udev-service-type} can now be configured and extended
+with eudev hardware configuration files (named @dfn{hwdb} by the eudev
+project).")
+ (de "Der Udev-Dienst kann nun mit Hardwaredatenbanken (auch als
+@dfn{hwdb} bekannt) konfiguriert und erweitert werden.")
+ (fr "Le type de service @code{udev-service-type} peut maintenant être
+configuré et étendu avec des fichiers de configuration de matériel (appelés
+@dfn{hwdb} par le projet eudev).")
+ (zh "???? eudev ????????@dfn{hwdb}??????
+@code{udev-service-type}?")))
+
(entry (commit "10a193596368443f441077525ebbddf787d91e4b")
(title
(en "Linux-libre 4.14 removed due to end of upstream support")
--
2.41.0
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Liliana Marie Prikler wrote on 27 Feb 18:56 +0100
[PATCH v4 0/3] Updated news with your suggestions
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
cover.1709056571.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
Hi Guix,

this series should take in all the change requests that were mentioned
for v3. If any of them are not in there, that is an oversight of mine;
please point them out.

Cheers

Liliana Marie Prikler (1):
news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.

Vivien Kraus (2):
news: Add entry for hwdb support in udev-service-type.
news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.

etc/news.scm | 72 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 72 insertions(+)


base-commit: 7bf4ce4582cd2f9c5b30c547262c1c4a426c0b9b
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 27 Feb 19:06 +0100
Re: [PATCH v4 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
2d9b3eaf474da81bf30d593f0837bca917ebeb9e.camel@planete-kraus.eu
Thank you for the hard work of piecing together the hints and
suggestions in different languages!

Le lundi 26 février 2024 à 20:46 +0100, Liliana Marie Prikler a écrit :
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> +With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated
> and others
> +removed. 
The only thing missing here from the discussion is “some shell
extensions” instead of “some extensions”, otherwise I’m OK with all
news items.

Vivien
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Liliana Marie Prikler wrote on 26 Feb 20:46 +0100
[PATCH v4 3/3] news: Add entry for changes in GNOME 44 and its desktop service.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
6099a5a33a2f871800fae6de8579441e890ac013.1709056571.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.
---
etc/news.scm | 39 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 39 insertions(+)

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diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 5c4df0b912..efc2ce7ad6 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,45 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "523f3def65ab061a87f4fc9e6f9008e6a78fafb5")
+ (title
+ (en "GNOME updated to version 44 with a more modular desktop service")
+ (de "GNOME auf Version 44 aktualisiert mit modularem Dienst")
+ (fr "Mise à jour de GNOME en version 44 avec un service plus modulaire")
+ (zh "GNOME 44 ???????????????"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} now differentiates between
+shell, utilities, and extra-packages among other fields to bring more structure
+in its configuration.
+
+With the update to GNOME 44, some extensions have been deprecated and others
+removed. If any @code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} package causes an error
+while running your usual update routine, make sure to remove it from your
+profile.")
+ (de "Der Dienst @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} unterscheidet nun
+unter anderem zwischen den Feldern shell, utilities und extra-packages, und
+bringt so etwas mehr Struktur in die Konfiguration.
+
+Mit dem Update zu GNOME 44 wurden einige Erweiterungen als obsolet deklariert
+und andere entfernt. Falls ein Paket, dessen Name mit
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-} beginnt, zu einem Fehler während Ihrer
+Update-Routine führt, entfernen Sie es von Ihrem Profil.")
+ (fr "Le service @code{gnome-desktop-service-type} sépare
+maintenant les champs @code{shell}, @code{utilities} et @code{extra-
+packages} (entre autres) pour donner plus de structure à sa
+configuration.
+
+Pendant la mise à jour vers GNOME 44, certaines extensions du shell ont
+été dépréciées et d’autres supprimées. Si un paquet nommé
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} émet une erreur quand vous
+effectuez la mise à jour, vous devriez l’enlever de votre profil.")
+ (zh "@code{gnome-desktop-service-type} ???? @code{shell}?
+@code{utilities}?@code{extra-packages} ?????? GNOME ??????????
+
+?? GNOME 44 ????? GNOME Shell ?????????????????
+@code{gnome-shell-extension-@dots{}} ??????????????? profile ?
+???")))
+
(entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
(title
(en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
--
2.41.0
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Vivien Kraus wrote on 25 Feb 18:56 +0100
[PATCH v4 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
(address . 69392@debbugs.gnu.org)
c69da3e64b6251beee33c94d7745c418b1d89a5a.1709056571.git.liliana.prikler@gmail.com
* etc/news.scm: Add entry.

Change-Id: Icddcf269ff59a7ee2a14680ed95a167758ecddaf
Signed-off-by: Liliana Marie Prikler <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
---
etc/news.scm | 15 +++++++++++++++
1 file changed, 15 insertions(+)

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diff --git a/etc/news.scm b/etc/news.scm
index 18586768c0..5c4df0b912 100644
--- a/etc/news.scm
+++ b/etc/news.scm
@@ -28,6 +28,21 @@
(channel-news
(version 0)
+ (entry (commit "06d01c610e3bee61e38a177aecda5982d5b338ae")
+ (title
+ (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")
+ (de "GNOME Display Manager nutzt nun Wayland als Vorgabe")
+ (fr "GDM utilise Wayland par défaut")
+ (zh "GNOME ??????GDM??????? Wayland ??"))
+ (body
+ (en "The @code{gdm-service-type} is configured to use Wayland instead
+of Xorg by default.")
+ (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun Wayland
+als Vorgabe anstelle von Xorg.")
+ (fr "Le service @code{gdm-service-type} est configuré par défaut pour
+utiliser Wayland au lieu de Xorg.")
+ (zh "@code{gdm-service-type} ???? Xorg ?? Wayland?")))
+
(entry (commit "498db4de1f09414adf68a3a383f0178434035179")
(title
(en "The udev service also manages hardware configuration files")
--
2.41.0
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pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote on 27 Feb 20:54 +0100
(name . Liliana Marie Prikler)(address . liliana.prikler@gmail.com)
87plwhzns7.fsf@pelzflorian.de
Some more final comments.

First, is it intended that the author is
Vivien Kraus <liliana.prikler@gmail.com>
and not
Vivien Kraus <vivien@planete-kraus.eu>
?

Vivien Kraus <liliana.prikler@gmail.com> writes:
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> + (title
> + (en "The GNOME Display Manager uses wayland by default")

Please capitalize Wayland in the English title.

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> + (de "Der Dienst @code{gdm-service-type} ist verwendet nun Wayland

Remove the word “ist”, otherwise there’d be two verbs in this sentence.
I missed this one.

Regards,
Florian
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pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote on 28 Feb 08:18 +0100
Re: [bug#69392] [PATCH v4 2/3] news: Add entry for GDM defaulting to wayland.
(name . Liliana Marie Prikler)(address . liliana.prikler@gmail.com)
87cysh5a5f.fsf@pelzflorian.de
Final addendum, Hilton, Vivien, Liliana should get copyright headers.

Regards,
Florian
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Liliana Marie Prikler wrote on 28 Mar 20:52 +0100
(name . pelzflorian (Florian Pelz))(address . pelzflorian@pelzflorian.de)
d8caaa3bed53de9e031594471b0636171453ee1c.camel@gmail.com
Am Mittwoch, dem 28.02.2024 um 08:18 +0100 schrieb pelzflorian (Florian
Pelz):
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> Final addendum, Hilton, Vivien, Liliana should get copyright headers.
Of course we should. In fact we did, as it's pushed.

Closing
Closed
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