Manual typo in section "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"

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  • Jack Hill
  • Naga Malleswari
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Jack Hill wrote on 19 Feb 2020 23:10
Manual typo in section "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"
(address . bug-guix@gnu.org)(name . Gábor Boskovits)(address . boskovits@gmail.com)
alpine.DEB.2.20.2002191705060.11123@marsh.hcoop.net
Tags: easy

Hello Guix,

In the manual section 4.8, "Invoking ο?½guix time-machineο?½", I believe that
"are passed unmodified to the ο?½guixο?½ command if the specified revision,"
would read better if it said, "to the ο?½guixο?½ command of the specified
revision."

I've filed this as a bug like #39417 as an easy task for Outreachy
applicants. Let me know if a patch would be preferred.

Best,
Jack
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Naga Malleswari wrote on 24 Mar 2020 06:31
[Outreachy] Submitting Patch for : Manual typo in s ection "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"
c2f5968b-e830-8090-6b94-c4cff46a8db8@riseup.net
Hi

I have picked up #39681  in  http://issues.guix.gnu.org/easy.

Made changes to the documentation and submitting the patch. Please
review and suggest any changes.

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NagaMalli
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From acbdaf012aad78870bcfa51b72faf8f0a3b4c082 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Naga Malleswari <nagamalli@riseup.net>
Date: Tue, 24 Mar 2020 10:50:56 +0530
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix typo in syntax description. * doc/guix.texi
(Invoking guix time-machine): Fix typo 'of' instead of 'if'.

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doc/guix.texi | 3 ++-
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

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diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 77a4b8ed71..404a3e4777 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -75,6 +75,7 @@ Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Wiktor ?elazny@*
Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Damien Cassou@*
Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Jakub K?dzio?ka@*
Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Jack Hill@*
+Copyright @copyright{} 2020 Naga Malleswari@*
Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document
under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.3 or
@@ -4207,7 +4208,7 @@ guix time-machine @var{options}@dots{} -- @var{command} @var {arg}@dots{}
@end example
where @var{command} and @var{arg}@dots{} are passed unmodified to the
-@command{guix} command if the specified revision. The @var{options} that define
+@command{guix} command of the specified revision. The @var{options} that define
this revision are the same as for @command{guix pull} (@pxref{Invoking guix pull}):
@table @code
--
2.25.1
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Danny Milosavljevic wrote on 24 Mar 2020 13:08
Re: [Outreachy] Submitting Patch for : Manual typo in section "Invoking ‘guix time-machine’"
(name . Naga Malleswari)(address . nagamalli@riseup.net)
20200324130859.2f85cf0b@scratchpost.org
Hi,

thanks for the patch!

Pushed to guix master as commit 022767d7c132d20d684e0dec7c6010fdcf408e3d
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