On Fri, Sep 17 2021, Sarah Morgensen wrote: > Hi, > > Looking at this again I have a couple more comments. > > Xinglu Chen writes: >> +@cindex miscellaneous build utilities >> +This section documents some miscellaneous utilities that are useful to >> +have. > > "that are useful to have" is implied by its presence in the manual, so > it's unnecessary to write it. Good point. > Also, you might consider adding a rule to .dir-locals.el: > > (eval . (put list-when 'scheme-indent-function 1)) > > which would cause it to be indented like this: > > (list-when expr1 > expr2 > expr3) Yes, that would be a good idea. > (I pointed out a couple other minor grammar corrections in the last > review--did you see those?) Oops, looks like I missed those. I will send a v2 with the suggestions applied. :-)