From debbugs-submit-bounces@debbugs.gnu.org Thu Jul 22 15:16:58 2021 Received: (at 49654) by debbugs.gnu.org; 22 Jul 2021 19:16:58 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:41647 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1m6eBm-00074T-28 for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Thu, 22 Jul 2021 15:16:58 -0400 Received: from mx1.dismail.de ([78.46.223.134]:10733) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1m6eBh-0006vR-3O for 49654@debbugs.gnu.org; Thu, 22 Jul 2021 15:16:56 -0400 Received: from mx1.dismail.de (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mx1.dismail.de (OpenSMTPD) with ESMTP id 9c27a7e6; Thu, 22 Jul 2021 21:16:45 +0200 (CEST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed; d=dismail.de; h= mime-version:date:content-type:content-transfer-encoding:from :message-id:subject:to:cc:in-reply-to:references; s=20190914; bh=OGMWAc9kFMzUzgYAyNOdZfZw1thdjSixIR4QP1J9fNk=; b=mC7GrRwn1nXz fffNlojeB5RhhUxVx5pQhzcMyhl4B2701KV6HT60CxoRNj9yt8N2bcz35Gd24x47 4DdDD4v1NspJ15A8Zc8XEepDrtZsKf6QFr7yPIYW6mB9MOVhmqaCtdcVxsR7v551 DVEkcZWEvdHb0ay/Muhn4+C6yKQ+Rl/E51cBE8Lul5zxOmVBr/oKWEd51BTgbjyd iFAyG4B169ZFhnf4hMcw4+9kzM5A4VoGeNlemRUA521JW++hf6qQr5J0Z8rhECar eSmWgLDbP9ccfNGxj4520AWieXLkGzYxqU1iffswKOK/a80L4gQ4Mq0k23Gf2LDp BpjhtvDAAA== Received: from smtp2.dismail.de ( [10.240.26.12]) by mx1.dismail.de (OpenSMTPD) with ESMTP id 622959ff; Thu, 22 Jul 2021 21:16:45 +0200 (CEST) Received: from smtp2.dismail.de (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by smtp2.dismail.de (OpenSMTPD) with ESMTP id d51b8060; Thu, 22 Jul 2021 21:16:45 +0200 (CEST) Received: by dismail.de (OpenSMTPD) with ESMTPSA id baede6cc (TLSv1.2:ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384:256:NO); Thu, 22 Jul 2021 21:16:44 +0200 (CEST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Date: Thu, 22 Jul 2021 19:16:44 +0000 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Mailer: RainLoop/1.14.0a From: jbranso@dismail.de Message-ID: <2a373bf54c17a11a37ab8f2ca86ef07f@dismail.de> Subject: Re: bug#49654: [PATCH] doc: Add full disc encryption guide to the cookbook To: "Sarah Morgensen" In-Reply-To: <86tukns2mc.fsf@mgsn.dev> References: <86tukns2mc.fsf@mgsn.dev> <20210720052229.15438-1-jbranso@dismail.de> X-Spam-Score: -0.7 (/) X-Debbugs-Envelope-To: 49654 Cc: 49654@debbugs.gnu.org, rg@raghavgururajan.name X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: debbugs-submit-bounces@debbugs.gnu.org Sender: "Debbugs-submit" X-Spam-Score: -1.7 (-) July 21, 2021 6:50 PM, "Sarah Morgensen" wrote:=0A=0A= > Hello Joshua, Raghav,=0A> =0A> Good to see more guides like this. In ad= dition to what others have=0A> already pointed out, I've got few readabil= ity suggestions, reading this as a=0A> layperson :) (Questions are intent= ended to be rhetorical, to illustrate=0A> where a layperson might have qu= estions or be confused.)=0A =0AThanks so much for you proof-reading! I'l= l update and push a new patch!=0A =0A> Also, consider referencing relevan= t sections of the manual, such as=0A> =0A> https://guix.gnu.org/manual/en= /html_node/Manual-Installation.html=0A> =0A> so users know where to find = more detailed information.=0A =0AThat is an awesome idea! I will do so!= =0A=0A> Hope that helps,=0A> Sarah