Brett, Brett Gilio 写道: >> -The service type for the TLP tool. Its value should be a >> valid >> -TLP configuration (see below). To use the default settings, >> simply >> -write: >> +The service type for the TLP tool. The default settings are >> optimised >> +for battery life on most systems, but you can tweak them to >> your heart's >> +content by passing a valid @code{tlp-configuration} as its >> value: […] > I would replace "as its value:" with "to the service type:", so > it reads > "... but you can tweak them to your heart's content by passing a > valid > tlp-configuration to the service type:" Ding. You picked up on the same niggle that bugged me — both in the original & here. I thought I'd just stared at it for too long. ‘Value’ is a reference to the terminology used in (gnu services). ‘To the service type’ sounds less accurate. I find the sentence close to clunky is it is; what about a short and sweet: +The service type for the TLP tool. The default settings are optimised +for battery life on most systems, but you can tweak them to your heart's +content by adding a valid @code{tlp-configuration}: ^^^^^^ Now I've definitely stared at this for too long. How typical for a prose patch :-) > Otherwise, it looks great to me! Thanks, T G-R