Hi Nicolas,

Den tis 2 juni 2020 kl 13:04 skrev Nicolas Goaziou <mail@nicolasgoaziou.fr>:
Nitpick: you need full stops at the end of each sentence in the commit
message.

> +         (sha256
> +          (base32
> +           "0bav9ipfm0vy26n74ngsmjzc7fsyqz6xmriadzx55s44h8p5dn1s"))))

Nitpick: could you move the hash on the same line as `base32'?

> +      (build-system emacs-build-system)
> +      (home-page
> +       "https://github.com/jimhourihan/glsl-mode")

Nitpick: could you move the URL on the same line as `home-page'?

> +      (synopsis
> +       "Major mode for Open GLSL shader files")

Nitpick: … guess what… ;)

> +      (description
> +       "Major mode for editing OpenGLSL grammar files, usually files ending with
> +`.vert', `.frag', `.glsl', `.geom'.

This should be a complete sentence, e.g.,

  The library provides a major mode…

Note that Texinfo syntax for file extensions is @file, so the rest of
the sentence ought to be:

  files ending with @file{.vert}, @file{.frag}…

> Is is based on c-mode plus some

Typo and nitpick: "It is based on C mode"

Could you send an updated patch?

Thank you for the speedy response. I sent in a new patch, which should fix all the things mentioned above.
Let me know if it ended up in the right place. I'm pretty new with the git send-email workflow. 

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